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Jackweb

Jan 28, 2023 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

THE POETIC SAILOR

silence sails
on poet's bed
a traveling mind
with ethereal beauty
set for poetic adventures

©® Onyinyechi Cosmos Etu

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Imo State - Republic of Biafra(Nigeria), NGA

Favorite Poets: Late Christopher Okigbo, Wole soyinka, Maya Angelou, W.H. Longfellow, John Milton, W.B. Yeat.

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Comments

2 years 5 months ago

dear friend,

a beautiful short piece that makes me think of sailing the warm waters of one's dreams! good work!

*hugs, Cat

2 years 5 months ago

O yes!

Thank you very much Cat!.
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2 years 5 months ago

Nice job...

of sailing into a safe harbor. Easy to read and drift away. ~ Geez.
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2 years 5 months ago

Thanks

So much for reading and commenting.
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2 years 5 months ago

The Poetic Sailor

Hi, Jackweb,
This is smooth and easy-going. A lovely read. The shape of the poem adds to the mood and feeling.
Thank you!
L

2 years 5 months ago

Heart felt thanks

For taking your time to read and comment.
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2 years 5 months ago

O yeah!

Much appreciated for reading and commenting.
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