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Clentin
Clentin
Jan 30, 2023 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
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Little Noises

There are sounds we never hear
Like spiders walking across a mirror
Or ants moving tons of sand
And bees that on flowers land
A million sounds that are so near
Yet never reach the human ear!

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: USA Pennsylvania, USA

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Rula

Rula

2 years 4 months ago

Hello Clentin

I wonder if this is a repost. I'm sure I commented on it.
Love the theme and how simple it reads yet so deep and well excuted.
Best wishes.

Clentin

Clentin

2 years 4 months ago

I wanted to see if additional

I wanted to see if additional comments were needed or should I expand, keep the same open or change anything from current presentation

Jackweb

Jackweb

2 years 4 months ago

Really liked

The several imageries scattered in the poem. It left you wondering and thinking... This drives ones mind to picture many things in one spot. A profound brevity.
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Clentin

Clentin

2 years 4 months ago

Thankyou.

Thankyou.
When I wrote is I was thinking about trees falling in the woods, we don’t see or hear them but they still make noise when they fall?

Good comments
Thank you

Clentin

Clentin

2 years 4 months ago

Thankyou.

Thankyou.
When I wrote is I was thinking about trees falling in the woods, we don’t see or hear them but they still make noise when they fall?

Good comments
Thank you

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

2 years 4 months ago

hello Clentin,

I read your poem, I liked it very much as none of your rhymes felt forced. I thought about things that go bump in the night!

* hugs, Cat
*ever, eddy styx