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ALL DAYS ARE MOTHER'S DAYS

And this is what we call cyclic

all changes
hands face and smile

once who led you to school
now stands cool
awaiting your arrival

the one who buttered your toasts for you
now waits a soft slice of bread from you

the one who kissed you daily to school
now waits for a kiss

will you give she thinks
a tear flows down her cheek

she knows smells now her repose
the son too has also gone through change
his consort is all for whom he remains

my son come once again
at least today 'tis Mother's rightful day

come and in my arms do play
just for once if you may...

if only for a wee while today...

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Lavender

Lavender

2 years 5 months ago

All Days Are Mothers Days

Hello, Lovedly,
This feels like an homage to a specific special day - other than the traditional Mother's Day. Maybe birthday or anniversary? Tender last line.
Lav

Seren

Seren

2 years 5 months ago

Dear Lovely.

Kudos.

This holds a poignancy for me. I miss my mother everyday.

Love and hugs Sis xxx

lovedly

lovedly

2 years 5 months ago

Thanks did you read MY MOM'S SMILES OVER 300 PAGES OF

COMMENTS FROM WORLD OVER
So many sites
My best poem then
now it is
''GIVE PEACE A CHANCE ''
READ across Internet
by over 11000 times
as of now
FROM NEO I don't know ...no way to know either

But I thank all who have read it
sis