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lovedly
lovedly
Feb 09, 2023 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

POEM WHICH TOOK SEVEN DECADES

My pockets
are holey
some feel in deep
and
kindness show
it makes me glow

many smile
then let me go

now I say
come along
at times
we love
often blow
what next
who knows...

About This Poem

Last Few Words: I was then in grade seven impoverished now I have flourished Read on the transformation..

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

lovedly

lovedly

2 years 5 months ago

Tim

'Twas the other way around
riches to rags then after seven decades
did rebounce
Glad you came
to pronouce

lovedly

lovedly

2 years 4 months ago

Yes RA

who can say that better than you
we still live and continue

Don't we
you and me
all poets
we wee weee.......................

Seren

Seren

2 years 5 months ago

Loved Sis

Jess would be so proud of your growth, I know I am.

You're starting to feel it aren't you? if not I am feeling it for you.

I am so proud of you.

This is poetry. and you are the poet.

love always Sis xox