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Feb 10, 2023
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My Choice
You are nothing more than a choice.
My choice.
We liked each other and you wanted more
Though it made my heart sore I couldn't ignore
Those calls and pleas surrendered me
Into making that choice.
A year later and I still dread that choice,
And I wish I had never listened to your voice,
Calling me and forcing me
Into making that choice.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: This is about my boyfriend of 1 year, and I do have some regrets. I love him, but it gets difficult.
Review Request Direction:
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Rula
2 years 5 months ago
Hello Sahar
I like it when people use poetry as a therapy or to get some bad feelings out.
I thought this is really raw and lucid.
I am sure you're going to have the right direction. You're still young but you have a brave heart.
Keep it up.
Sahar
2 years 5 months ago
Thank you so much !!
Thank you so much !!
Sahar
2 years 5 months ago
Thank you :))
Thank you :))
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 5 months ago
Write your heart
You’ll be able to process your emotions much better. It forces us to look back on our thoughts and see what is working and what isn’t. Words said cannot be taken back. Words on a page can be augmented.
Nice job
Tim
Sahar
2 years 5 months ago
Thank you, Tim :)
Thank you, Tim :)