Thirty Four Years...

Soft eyes and a smile or two
you gazing my way
our Valentine's Day for two

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Direction: What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Poe, Emily Dickenson, Robert Frost, Shakespeare, and many of the poets here at Neopoet.

This user supports Neopoet so it can be free to all

Comments

Geezer

2 years 5 months ago

Frankly...

I can't see how she has put up with me so long. Thanks for the read and comment. ~ Geez.
.

Rosewood Apothecary

2 years 5 months ago

I say that all the time

I. Am. Impossible. Loads of emotions fly around of nearly every variant. The wife just does the impossible everyday.

Tim

Seren

2 years 5 months ago

Dearest Bro

Send my love to your love, it's gorgeous the connection you guys have,

I have always said how nice it would be if someone wrote a valentine's poem for me. it's a gift I've never been blessed to received but you first need a partner in crime. lol

Congratulation's sweets I will talk to you soon.

love and higgliest bugs Sis xox

Geezer

2 years 5 months ago

I have written one for her, almost every single Valentine's Day, [I may have missed a couple by being sick.]
Thanks Sis, we love you too. She says; "She's just been hanging with the wrong blokes!" LoL. Actually, she said; "She's just been hanging out with the wrong guys, try the little ones, they try harder!" We're having take-out Chinese tonight, maybe watch some movie or something. Just us! ~ Geez.
.

Seren

2 years 5 months ago

Dearest Bro

I roared with laughter

"Try the little ones they try harder"

Oh my God I adore her she's hilarious

Tell her at nearly 6ft? my first boyfriend was a litt'un and the disparity in our Heights was incredible lmao I couldn't wear heels. I'm over 6ft in heels. Hahahaha

Tell her to find a nice tall one for me lol

Love you both dearly higgliest bugs Jayne xoxb

lovedly

2 years 5 months ago

CONGRATS GEEZ

As they told me HAIKU you call THE EAST ///has to have 17 words or ///
three lines verse as
575
yours appears as 757
I think I don't count syllables you know.... so ask someones who does know ...
ANY way congrats to your wife
she extracted from you a haikueeeeeeeeeeeee
and yes HAIKUS ARE
basically Japanese

Geezer

2 years 5 months ago

Yeah, I know...

traditional Haiku are 5-7-5 but we are untraditional types, anyway. The two of us, always been just a little of the black sheep of the family. Guess that's what brought us to the place we were, at the time we met. Both of us climbed a rocky road to the overlook where we are now. Thanks for the read and comment, ~ Geez.
.