RoseBlack

Feb 14, 2023 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Deep

Lone ears hear no love
The heart weeps in sad refrains
Splinters in burned ash

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: United States

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, Jim Morrison

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Comments

Geezer

2 years 4 months ago

I'm feeling...

this one! I thought I heard what you were saying the other night. Sorry if it's so. ~ Geez.
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RoseBlack

2 years 4 months ago

Thanks Gee

Valentine's Day is always a little downer for me and this year was no exception. Figured I would put it to a poem.

Rosewood Apothecary

2 years 4 months ago

Should we play around?

Yes it’s true that deaf ears hear no tales. Check this-

Lone ears hear not love
The heart weeps in strained refrains
Splinters in burned ash

RoseBlack

2 years 4 months ago

Hi Tim

I like this a lot. Especially the first line.

Candlewitch

2 years 4 months ago

dear Carrie,

I am so sorry for your situation, but it is true; a broken heart is fantastic inspiration to write with, as you have proven here,

*hugs, Cat

RoseBlack

2 years 4 months ago

Thank you Cat

It's ok though...I have written many good pieces as a result.

RoseBlack

2 years 4 months ago

Thank you Kat

Hope you had a wonderful Valentine's Day

Lavender

2 years 4 months ago

Deep

Hello, Carrie,
Concise description of pain, which I hope will soon move along and your love for writing will bring about words of positive love.
Take care,
L

RoseBlack

2 years 4 months ago

Hi L

I am slowly working on it. One foot in front of the other...thank you for the comment