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Feb 17, 2023
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In Search of Her Still
In Search of Her
I walk daily sloppily
walking down my nearby lanes
in search of her
she promised to look for me
If I did look for her
has she forgotten those lovely kisses
sweetened roses
pinkish cheek I now miss
ah lovely words
so far still unheard
ere the dawn
sunset night betwixt
love again begins
does she know it
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lovedly
2 years 4 months ago
and as lovely as u r
22222222222222222 so I must thank uuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 4 months ago
That’s a pretty thing
Good job
Tim
lovedly
2 years 4 months ago
GREAT
R A
Lavender
2 years 4 months ago
In Search of Her Still
Aw, Lovedly,
This flows over and over with emotion. Stirring poetry.
Lav
lovedly
2 years 4 months ago
Thanks
Lav
let my poetry all stir
Seren
2 years 4 months ago
Dear Love
Sigh this is beautiful.
Sorry I'm late I've been busy if you read my latest you will see what I've been doing.
Bravo!!!
Love and biggest hugs Sis xox
lovedly
2 years 4 months ago
Yes Sis
I know you are busy
............howz the concussion..........................
Seren
2 years 4 months ago
Good and the black eyes are
Good and the black eyes are fading lol hugs
lovedly
2 years 4 months ago
You must not fade Sis
nor can you evade
stand in the shade
you are to all of us
here elevate
ah made
Seren
2 years 4 months ago
Dear Love
I will not fade i am back and I'll be here more this week I am less busy (I hope fingers crossed)
Love and biggest hugs Sis xxx
lovedly
2 years 4 months ago
hahaha
If I keep my fingers crossed ....how will I compose a poemy
for baby sis lol
Seren
2 years 4 months ago
awwwww
Thats sooo sweet thank you darlin' biggest hugs xox
lovedly
2 years 4 months ago
Life is that swimming pool
Life is that swimming pool where all love to swim and stay cool even when all alone why moan no one will come to help you love iis the only medicine a panacea for all lovers too and life swimming safe to the shores must pursue being lead by the bestest poetess Ausie Sis you
Dalton
2 years 4 months ago
Lovedly
Kindly words eloquently arranged of love just consummated after years of pining
lovedly
2 years 4 months ago
Thanks Dalton
hope you enjoyed with your maiden.....comments ..lol