Until You Win

When life just doesn't seem fair
When you think they don't care
When you feel that you are alone
When all hope seems to be gone

You have to hold your head up high
Keep going and never ask God why
Even when you fail again and again
Remember, it isn't over Until You Win

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

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