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Clentin
Clentin
Feb 21, 2023 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
This poem is part of the contest:

Neopoem Of The Week February 19th to February 25th 2023

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Beauty

Beauty exists in many places
More than In our babies faces

Sometimes a thought we embrace
And a dress full of lace

A kiss from my wife
Or simply life

Loveliness
Finesse

Grace

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: USA Pennsylvania, USA

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Lavender

Lavender

2 years 4 months ago

Beauty

Hello, Clentin,
I believe this to be a Nonet? So delicate and beautiful, and full of gratitude. If it is a Nonet, I think the first line has one too many syllables. Perhaps remove "so"?
Thank you!
L

Clentin

Clentin

2 years 4 months ago

Thank you

Thank you

I thought I had 9 syllables?
I will recheck.
Is this officially called a Nonet.

Thanks, I will edit

Lavender

Lavender

2 years 4 months ago

Beauty

Yes, it appears to be a lovely Nonet!
L

Clentin

Clentin

2 years 4 months ago

Thank you for your comments.

Thank you for your comments. I was told that perhaps you could help me redo my page, color background, text etc. I am a premium member, new, but can’t seem to get how to use the site correctly

Geezer

Geezer

2 years 4 months ago

Okay...

See the black band at the top of the page?
at the right of the page you will see your name
right next to log out. Click on that.

Then on the drop down, you will see [edit my profile]
Click on that.

On the left of the new page, you will see a box with account in it.
Click there and you will see all the things you need to change
everything on your profile. If you have any difficulties thereafter,
I will point you to one of our techs. ~ Geezer.
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Geezer

Geezer

2 years 4 months ago

Hmmmm...

I will check up and see what the matter might possibly be. Did you hit save at the end?
~ Geezer.
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Rosewood Apothecary

Rosewood Apothecary

2 years 4 months ago

Well done on the format

I fall into the same rhythms a lot. Stuff like this is a great exercise. In this case it’s got a touching subject and that makes for a sweet reading poem

Tim

Leslie

Leslie

2 years 4 months ago

BEAUTY

THIS IS SIMPLE BUT SO BEAUTIFUL. IT INVOKES THE PUREST EMOTIONS!

RoseBlack

RoseBlack

2 years 4 months ago

Clentin

Great job on the format and the meaning of the poem! If only everyone could step back and find beauty in even the smallest things, I think there would be much more happiness in the world.