Some other time

Some other time...
my eyes are freshly wet
do await some more time

I now no more can mime
it's late at night
need more rhyme

sleep over powers me
let dawn rise
overnight
I will become
may be wise
may be not
if comes early
my demise
then as you prefer soul
I solely
shall rise

be happy...
or many 'twill be a surprise

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

Candlewitch

2 years 4 months ago

I think...

You are supposed to only post ONE poem at a time! I think you are in violation of Neopoet Rules!

lovedly

2 years 4 months ago

let me see

now who reads this

Lavender

2 years 4 months ago

Some Other Time

Hello, Lovedly,
This feels as if there is a lot on your mind late at night. I hope you are well, Lovedly!
Lav

lovedly

2 years 4 months ago

yeps

I work mostly at night Lav