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Feb 22, 2023
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The invisible vagabond
The silent soul
who sullenly
seeps within
the sentimental
seas of solitude .
Always lead astray
by every
passing day .
Just to remain
amongst the stars.
Striding through
time’s strangled streams
of faintly
faded dreams .
Embedded beneath
the once blue
eyed beams of an
embittered beauty .
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Lavender
2 years 4 months ago
The Invisible Vagabond
Hello, Edward,
A silent soul traveling among the stars. This is quiet, yet with vivid imagery.
Thank you,
L
Edward nigma
2 years 4 months ago
My inspiration
It helped give me the idea of the invisible vagabond the loner sewn into
Solitude and it’s eternal sea of faded moments. Where it drifts from past to present but always ends up within the listing thoughts of what could have been .
https://youtu.be/gUzk26pBR2A
Lavender
2 years 4 months ago
Hi, Edward,
Your poem is spot on. You are quite the poet...
L
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 4 months ago
I agree
He’s very, very talented. He has his own style, amazing vocabulary, abstract thought patterns, logical movement through the text. Every. Single. Time.
Total genius
Tim
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 4 months ago
Go read anything he has published
This is a master of alliterative poetry. Absolutely uncanny abilities with this. The big vocab helps.
Tim