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Feb 23, 2023
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What Will Be
It is not is
It is not was.
It is what will be.
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Obadiah Grey
2 years 4 months ago
We're heading for Wem-b-ly.
We're heading for Wem-b-ly.
Obi.
Alex Tanner
2 years 4 months ago
HaHa
Hahahaha. Bolton supporter? Alex
Obadiah Grey
2 years 4 months ago
Hiya, Alex.
Hiya, Alex.
You surprise me mate!
A Bolton supporter with a sense of humour,
but then again, I guess you need one eh?
On a serous note,
after reading your back catalogue you are obviously an accomplished poet that is not afraid to try a different style,
more power to your hand mate,
I sort of flit between hating and despising these short "Japan-ish" poems,
only because they are often beyond my limited knowledge of poetry,
but this one piqued my interest,,,,,,,, I think I like it,,,, well,,,, maybe.
Cheers, Obi.
Alex Tanner
2 years 4 months ago
Bolton! not Me
Hello Obi. i was wondering if you were a Bolton supporter. Me! I'm Pompey. I Still need a strong sense of Humour.
Thanks for your comments. I too can't see what is so clever about the Japanese poems. I don't think those who read my first effort realised I was taking the P. Anyway I'm plucking up courage to put up my latest it's as strong sexually as anything I've written, we shall see. Alex
Seren
2 years 4 months ago
Dear Alex
I really like this, it is saying so much more than those few words.
I obviously can't critique this one there is nothing wrong with it!
Kind Regards Jayne
Alex Tanner
2 years 4 months ago
Hello Jayne
From a cold, dull Island. Thank you Jayne I always appreciate your comments. Alex.