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Feb 24, 2023
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READ ICU ONE FIRST THEN SECOND
I C U SECOND
I just heard docs silently whisper
Coma
now nothing one can do
but
shift her to the
QUEUE
in the ward
as just another one
richest
lady once...
what a decision
not even a private room
Alas
''There is no cure for Birth and Death but to enjoy the interval...''
so spoke my spouse.....''
Gasp!!!
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Final results expected by tomorrow or Sunday Wait and C
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Seren
2 years 4 months ago
Bro
Unfortunately, that's the times we live in, well done I think they go well together!!
You're really writing some good poems.
hugs and love Sis
lovedly
2 years 4 months ago
Your teachings and jess's too
Blessings
you give dear Aussie Sis
''I am thinking of coming out with a ''SOUVENIR 23 BEST POEMS ''
You have read ...mostly Can you suggest which would meet the criteria
NEOS all who read me sincerely
will get a free book from me
ere .....you know
I too go.............
lol yet
Seren
2 years 4 months ago
Smiles
Why 23?
hugs Sis
lovedly
2 years 4 months ago
out of over 30*** grand
23 would do
Costly affair publishing is you know
poor man
Can an AUSSIE pub be found
I wonder sis
Lavender
2 years 4 months ago
Second ICU
Hello, Lovedly,
So sorry to hear this about your dear friend.
Lav
lovedly
2 years 4 months ago
Life needs to
move on Can't help it Can we?
Leslie
2 years 4 months ago
ICU ONE FIRST THEN SECOND
SCARY STUFF NO DOUBT. THIS IS A VERY INTERESTING SITUATION WE ALL MAY WILL PROBABLY END UP ON BOTH SIDES OF THE STICK. I ENJOYED THE CREATIVE USE OF WORDS THE RHYTHYM AND PUNCUATION!