All He Is (a cinquain)

Steven
incredible, fantastic
amazing affirming astounding
quiet absorbing studious factual
nurturing

About This Poem

Last Few Words: a cinquain a cinquain Line 1: one word (a vocabulary word, a noun) Line 2: two adjectives that describe line one Line 3: three gerunds(verbs ending in ing pertaining to line one) Line 4: four words that describe line one Line 5: one word that sums up line (a synonym that sums up line one)

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Northwestern Wisconsin USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, William Blake, Bob Dylan, Tom Petty, Carlos Castaneda, Jim Morrison, the whole of Neopoet and many more.

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Comments

Geezer

2 years 4 months ago

Hmmmm...

I think that sooner or later, I shall have to try these cinquains. Nicely done, an affirmation of your love for Steven.
~ Geez.
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Candlewitch

2 years 4 months ago

dear Geezer,

I have read that there a few different styles of it, but I do not know if that is true. thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate that.

*hugs & good morning, Cat

RoseBlack

2 years 4 months ago

A wonderful poem

Describing how you see your Steven and in my new favorite form. Well done!

Candlewitch

2 years 4 months ago

hello Carrie!

thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. I can see why you like this form. it is appealing.

*hugs, Cat

Lavender

2 years 4 months ago

All He Is

Hi, Cat,
It sounds like Steven is nurturing - and all those lovely things in between! Very nice cinquain!
Lxx

Candlewitch

2 years 4 months ago

dear Lavender,

thank you for your words of support.

*hugs, Cat

Rosewood Apothecary

2 years 4 months ago

I like the format

You got yourself a real dreamboat. You’re a lucky duck and you acknowledge it and I love it because I feel the same way. I like the way this format feels.

Tim