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lovedly

Feb 28, 2023 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Mind and confusion

Last night my mind revolved
about its own inner axis
I couldn't make out
what happened

went off to sleep

A rested mind woke me up
smile
it's sunrise

I smiled pulled all curtains
windows were wide open
swarm of bees came in
Queen Bee...
also smiled ...

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

2 years 4 months ago

Mind and Confusion

Hello, Lovedly,
A lovely abstract poem with a very appropriate title. I did see the sunrise when the curtains were pulled back, and the happy smile on the Queen Bee.
Thank you!
Lav

2 years 4 months ago

Ha ha

Thanks Lav nice comment as bright as the sun lol

2 years 4 months ago

yeah

bees could sting and leave no honey
still welcome em as Queen
will also be coming lol

2 years 4 months ago

You need...

bees to make honey. Lovedly will frolic with the bees and eat honey all the days of his life. ~ Geez.
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