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RoseBlack
RoseBlack
Mar 02, 2023 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
This poem is part of the contest:

Uninhibited

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Uninhibited

Awake
Milky white skin
Pressed against barren trees
Earth shattering copulation
Sleepless

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: United States

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, Jim Morrison

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Comments

Geezer

Geezer

2 years 3 months ago

Woooo...

Reminds me of when my ex and I went hunting one winter morning... Hmmmm. ~ Geez.
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RoseBlack

RoseBlack

2 years 3 months ago

Hunting

If that's what you want to call it.....glad you enjoyed!

Geezer

Geezer

2 years 3 months ago

Well...

we were hunting deer but decided to have a little break and warm up. ~ Geez.
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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

2 years 3 months ago

dear Carrie,

for our honeymoon we took a motorcycle ride to Canada riding both our bikes. camping out was great, except for a very rainy night. we gt rained out and our tent was about to be floating downstream. we stuffed our wet clothes in duffels and went to a motel. checked in and found a 24 hr. laundry. before that we hit a liquor store for refreshment. we spent the night singing songs, with the goal of each singing the worst songs ever written circa 1950 to 1973. next day was beautiful and sunny.

I love your poem btw.
*hugs, Cat

RoseBlack

RoseBlack

2 years 3 months ago

I love the stories

Our poems invoke on here. Makes us think back to different times in our lives. Unfortunately I have not had an outdoor in nature experience but I have had the backseat of a car in a empty park experience if that counts.