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Mar 03, 2023
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I Can Now Hear Him
Honey voice of god
from veiled curtains
heavenly clouds
God also smiles for me
as I see and hear
the unknown being
where is God
still tell me
anybody!!!
About This Poem
Last Few Words: God visited me last night Ah not in imagery....
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
2 years 4 months ago
Whoa! ...
The big man himself? I hope that you are not due for a transfer! I wouldn't want to have to translate from angel-speak, when I read your work. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
2 years 4 months ago
thanks Gee
Why is neopoet having internet banging!
Geezer
2 years 4 months ago
The site...
site is being upgraded a little at a time, each and every day, no worries. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
2 years 4 months ago
OK THANKZ Gee
get a column fitted where we all can see how many have read me else am I writing only for me Yes I'm not as dull as you perceive we r aged blokes experienced and all spent ....few comments are but natural
Tell Paul all sights show ....how many have read blokes like me
hehehe
Geeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Geezer
2 years 4 months ago
Sometimes...
you remind me of those people that I get friend requests from. They say I have thousands of friends on F.B. why won't you friend me? I don't have much in common with any of them. The only thing I can think of is that they know someone that I know. They just want to rack up thousands of friends to say, "I have thousands of friends." I am not interested in them. I don't answer them. I don't think that it is in the cards for this site, to have a reader count. I may be wrong, and it may appear, but I do believe that [Andy] who does the upgrades in more interested in keeping the site moving and accurate. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
2 years 4 months ago
tnx
good nite Gee remain friendly with me need not comment I know u know when to treat me like a football like did jess so thanks Good morning////night...which ever
Geezer
2 years 4 months ago
That is what...
I love about you lovedly, you always remain calm, cool and collected. I am always your friend. Like my wife says if I fear she is mad with me. I ask; "Do you still love me?" and she will reply, "Don't ask me now." LoL ~ Geez.
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lovedly
2 years 4 months ago
wow Gee
you equate me with ma'am
Kindly on my behalf her greet
lol 4 u
Seren
2 years 4 months ago
Dear Loved
I read the poem so short and it was well told and then I read your last few words. I'm not sure what to think after our conversation on your other poem. I'm a little confused and gobsmacked. Or I'd that God-smacked.
It's a nice poem and I think it's well constructed and I find nothing to critique.
Love Sis xxx
lovedly
2 years 4 months ago
impulsive
snap poem was just staring into the darkness
blank
I heard a murmur
was it my heart!