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Mar 04, 2023
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Fish Fry
Fish, fried, baked or breaded
Along with lettuce shredded
Fries, pizza, and cheese sticks
Coffee, cakes that pass our lips
With friends that share our thoughts
Talking, laughing about their plots
It's a thing we can't pass by
Officially called a Church Fish Fry
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
2 years 4 months ago
A nice...
snapshot of a day at the Church Fish Fry! Only thing I see to fix, is the omission of the apostrophe in [can't]. ~ Geezer.
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Clentin
2 years 4 months ago
Thank you, just a sort of fun
Thank you, just a sort of fun poem thinking about my Friday adventure!
I did make the changes, thank you
Clentin
2 years 4 months ago
Thank you, just a sort of fun
Thank you, just a sort of fun poem thinking about my Friday adventure!
I did make the changes, thank you
Clentin
2 years 4 months ago
Thank you, just a sort of fun
Thank you, just a sort of fun poem thinking about my Friday adventure!
I did make the changes, thank you
Clentin
2 years 4 months ago
Thank you. All poetry need
Thank you. All poetry need not be exceptionally deep. Fun to just express thoughts about everyday things.