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Like a ladybug

he appears on the dance floor
a singular soul
in the midst of the crowd

like the shine of her wings
his suit coat stands out
with trousers to match

a myriad of colour
the Celtic patterns
of yin and yang twirls

already a dance
for the eyes of the seated
to stare in wonder

but ’t’s in the red shoes
that the wonder gasps
as they tap out the steps

of a quickstep solo
bizarre and obverse
to the noise of the band.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: This captures a moment when, seated, a saw this person whose daring attire struck me because he lacked any kind of self-consciousness and could keep his own rhythm regardless of the noise of the reggae band.

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Manawatu-Whanganui, New Zealand

Favorite Poets: Sam Hunt, Denis Glover, Emily Dickinson, Thomas Merton, James K Baxter, T. S. Eliot, Gerard Manley Hopkins, Joy Cowley, W. B. Yeats

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