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Mar 11, 2023
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Time
Tic Toc tic tok tic
Seconds pass by each minute
Causing a new day
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
2 years 4 months ago
Unless...
this is a different universe, I think that the seconds pass by each minute. Of course, if you want to stick with that statement of minutes pass by, each second? I think that might work. The placing of a comma might make a difference here.
~ Geezer.
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Clentin
2 years 4 months ago
Thank you yes, I need a
Thank you yes, I need a revision. A simplistic thought on the day we change time
Geezer
2 years 4 months ago
I don't know...
about anyone else, but I hate the change of time every year. Let's just leave it the way it is.
~ Geezer.
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