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Apr 07, 2011
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Never Mind
I've barked at the moon before
when it likely weren't my time,
I've supped with the likes of fools
and felt completely sublime;
I wish that I could write, right now
something that'd inspire, awe;
or cause my reader to be left
nearly standing on his own jaw.
Today, my focus is "dribble"
it's such a daunting task,
I think I covered this before
someone really aught to ask.
In the in-between-time
at the risk of sounding, dense;
I'll circle around my topic
and try not to make much sense;
on second thought, I'll just behave
and end this sitting tall,
maybe I'll change the subject
just to confuse you, after all.
— docmaverick, Apr 07, 2011
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Draft
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Race_9togo
15 years 2 months ago
Doc
Good verse, excellent rhyming.
Or was it good verse? Did the lines really rhyme?
I'm CONFUSED!
LOL
Good stuff.
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