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William Lynn
William Lynn
Mar 25, 2023 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
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Thanking the Masters

Ernest Hemmingway: 1899-1961
John Steinbeck: 1902-1968

Thank you Ernest for the gifts you gave
The beautiful paths you paved anew,
And all the scenes your words described,
All the places you took me to.

Thank you John for your thoughtful prose
And the seeds of wonder you would sew,
Thank you for the trips we shared
From East of Eden to Cannery Row.

Hemmingway's and Steinbeck's words
Their master's touch on full display,
Have given readers so much joy
And their wonderous gifts live on today.

The question asked in title form
The answer is as it should be;
The bells that ring so loud and clear
Those bells they toll for thee.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: To give thanks to the two authors that gave me the love of reading and writing.

Review Request Direction: What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Not actively editing

About the Author

Country/Region: ID

Favorite Poets: My favorite poets are: , Kahill Gibran , Rod McKuen

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neopoet

neopoet

2 years 3 months ago

Neopoet AI

This poem is a heartfelt tribute to two of the greatest literary masters of the 20th century, Ernest Hemmingway and John Steinbeck. The poem does a wonderful job of paying homage to the authors, expressing appreciation for their works, and expressing the lasting legacy of their works. The poem has a steady rhythm, and the pacing is consistent throughout. The imagery used to describe their works is evocative and effective. The internal logic of the poem is sound, with each stanza providing a specific thank you for a different aspect of their work. The poem culminates in a powerful line that speaks to the lasting legacy of the authors and their works. Overall, this poem is a memorable tribute to Ernest Hemmingway and John Steinbeck, and a fitting celebration of their contributions to literature.

Alex Tanner

Alex Tanner

2 years 3 months ago

Masters

Not my favourite authors but for The Grapes of Wrath which made a vivid impression on me when I read it over 50 years ago. Now I shall re visit it. A fine tribute and compliment to those who are obviously your favourites. Alex

Ruby Lord

Ruby Lord

2 years 3 months ago

Thanking the masters

Your poem was pretty ingenious.

What a wonderful way to pay tribute to gifted authors. I enjoyed the flow of your verses and the references you used to their writing.

But what I liked most was the way you took something old and made it fresh. Well done :)

Rosewood Apothecary

Rosewood Apothecary

2 years 2 months ago

Masters indeed

Loved this one. Nice job on the meter and with the rhyme. I like how you worked their titles into the story you’re telling us. I’m a fan of both and so I definitely got a kick out of reading this.

Tim

William Lynn

William Lynn

2 years 2 months ago

Thanks for you comments Tim.

Thanks for you comments Tim. Yes, I did work in three titles. I wanted to work in my favorite, Grapes of Wrath, but it didn't work. Thanks again. - Bill