'To the left of kathmandu'

The below is a computer generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem 'To the left of kathmandu' is a quirky and humorous piece, with a clear and concise message. The use of rhyme and rhythm throughout the poem helps to create a playful and bouncy tone. The imagery used to describe the man's predicament is vivid and adds to the overall lightheartedness of the poem.

One line edit suggestion could be to change "up n now" to "now up and". This would help to improve the flow of the line and make it easier to read.

Overall, the poem is enjoyable and entertaining, with a clever use of language and a memorable message. However, the use of slang and informal language may not be suitable for all readers, and could potentially detract from the poem's overall impact.

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Oh Obi, you brought a smile to my face and a giggle to my mouth. Absolutely brilliant, I love it, straight forward, use of language and the dialect was divine. The topic as always, humorous and low, so low, I'll never be able to limbo beneath the bar you set, Pal. Ruby :)

You've done it again! Your little ditties always make me smile. ~ Geez.
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Katmandu is an interesting backdrop. I wish that I could pop them off like you, but give it some time.

sounds like the kind of days i have lol

Need say no more, HEHE!. Alex

I tip my hat.

Obi my friend, you've done it again you're such a clever feller. A kick arse, knock out joke teller!

I love the whole poem so much that it put another laugh line on my brow! I hope you are well?

*hugs, Cat