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May 23, 2023
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Raw Rhymes
Let all your raw rhymes
flow free as a stream.
In good and bad times,
like gold dust they'll gleam.
Your poems, like prayers,
send straight from your heart.
Then you and your cares
will peacefully part.
Your valuable verse
is treasure - dig deep!
Those lines that you nurse
I want you to weep.
Sow stanzas like seed
and one day you'll reap.
From heart they made bleed
all sorrow will seep!
About This Poem
Last Few Words: my poor little rhymes
Review Request Direction:
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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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neopoet
2 years 2 months ago
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Seren
2 years 2 months ago
Hello you
Not poor at all, its quite sadly beautiful,
I absolutely love the last two lines.
It's lovely to read you again.
Kind regards
Jayne
Blue-eyed Bolla
2 years 2 months ago
Raw Rhymes
Many thanks, Jane.
Tiffany Smith
2 years 2 months ago
wonderful
very heartfelt i enjoyed reading it
Blue-eyed Bolla
2 years 2 months ago
Raw Rhymes
Many thanks, Tiffany.