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This poem is part of the challenge:

May 2023 Challenge Dear John Letter

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Challenge- Dear John Letter

Roll over my love
Look deeply into my eyes
Kiss me one last time

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Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: USA Pennsylvania, USA

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Geezer

Geezer

2 years 1 month ago

How novel...

an idea for a modern, English senryu! Nothing more to be said. Good stuff! ~ Geezer.
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RoseBlack

RoseBlack

2 years 1 month ago

Dear John

The simplest, most touching Dear John letter I have seen. Great job!