Overthinking

I liked your poem, it read well and had a lot of charm about it.
The only point I would make is to end each statement with a full stop. Minimalism is effective but clarity can make a statement stronger.
Ruby :)

I like the minimalistic way it was written and to keep with the theme relax it didn’t make me ‘overly’ think. Or get lost in translation. The words were right there and accessible. I felt that the reader found peace from their past if only for one day. Pray as they sort things out they find relief. Someone might ask why do they have to continually think about the past rlsp at all? But sometimes breakups are financially, mentally, and emotionally messy. A child at home; perhaps the co parenting reminder or the new debt one finds themselves whatever the case may be.

Nice one, simple but effective. The lack of punctuation didn't concern me - maybe you could just make a space between statements for clarity?