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Jul 07, 2023
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A grizzled grazed grin
A Grizzled Grazed
grin gradually
growing back
into that
Innocently insecure
soul. Who once
heedfully hemmed
his half hummed
hopes within
the wistfully
withering
waters of
wonderment .
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
2 years ago
Yeah...
sometimes, we regret the time spent in ignorance, but when we realize our innocence gone...
Your alliteration is first rate! Nicely done.
~ Geez.
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Lavender
2 years ago
A Grizzled Grazed Grin
Hello, Edward,
I agree with Geezer.
Well done!
L
Edward nigma
2 years ago
Thank you
I was inspired by the Harry Chapin song the same sad singer which painted an image of meeting a old friend seeing that they’re to say something and apologize but all you’re left with is silence.
https://youtu.be/jTJIpbHnRMM