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Sep 08, 2023
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5 o’clock somewhere
Heavily stoned once again
Your cheap criteria set in
With your broken vows and spirit
All your beliefs- now fiction
All your facts are lies
All your lies – fate
The pain of a broken heart
Your painting of shattered dreams
Denial – of all hopeful thoughts
The monsters you create
Your dependent warped ways
Although your sorrow – flutters drowning for help
You're drowning in the sea of hopelessness (again.)
Your happiness slowly dying of starvation
While clenched to your so-called salvation.
(The Bottle)
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