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Oct 03, 2023
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OUT WITH THE FAIRIES
I should be out now
In the warmth of the sun.
Playing with Fairies,
We would have such fun.
What's that I hear?
Two and two make four!
I really don't care
School can be such a bore.
Oh! this classroom seat
So hard on my bum.
(Can I say that?)
Please don't tell my mum.
Still the Fairies will wait
Till the day ends
With the ringing of the bell
Then it's off with my friends.
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ruby Lord
1 year 8 months ago
Precious words to go with the
Precious words to go with the image. Loved it. Ruby :)
Alex Tanner
1 year 8 months ago
Thanks Ruby.
Saw the picture, thought of one of my granddaughters and knocked it off. Alex
Lavender
1 year 8 months ago
Out With The Fairies
Hello, Alex,
I agree with Ruby! Precious poetry to go along with the prompt!
L
Alex Tanner
1 year 8 months ago
Thanks L
Saw the picture, thought of one of my granddaughters and knocked it off. Alex