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Oct 09, 2023
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This poem is part of the challenge:
October 2023 Challenge Date night with Freddy Krueger
My Sister loves Freddy Krueger
my sister who dates Freddy Krueger
is safe 'cause she carries a Luger
it's a balance (of sorts)
-as he messes his shorts
when she points it and makes him eat boogers
About This Poem
Last Few Words: ...poking fun...Cheers! 1. tweaked the grammar- added parentheses.
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Ruby Lord
1 year 8 months ago
Love it, I'm still laughing,
Love it, I'm still laughing, thank you. Ruby :)
Triskelion
1 year 8 months ago
Yep...
...she's not my favourite sister, but I do respect her...lol
Thanks Ruby!
Thomas
Lavender
1 year 8 months ago
My Sister...
I bow to your limerick!
Well done!
L
Triskelion
1 year 8 months ago
...silliness.
..is the potatoes of limericks. Goes with the (meat)re. This one's not perfect, but c'est la vie!
Cheers Lavender!
Thomas
Geezer
1 year 8 months ago
Nice seeing...
the limericks. A perfect match for the Halloween holiday. Nicely done. ~ Geezer.
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Triskelion
1 year 8 months ago
Hey, Geezer
Limericks are my favourite form and always present a challenge. Thanks for reading and commenting!
Thomas
Lamington
1 year 8 months ago
What?
Who's Freddy Krueger?
Triskelion
1 year 8 months ago
Hi again
....not really sure...maybe I will look it up on the internet.
Cheers