Neopoem Of The Week October 8th to October 14th 2023

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Life Is A Maze

Life is a maze, so make a plan
Face up to what you fear.
Don’t make light, of what is dark
But be sure to make it clear.

Do not befriend the devil
Keep him close, but at arm’s length.
Look your daemons in the eye
To release your inner strength.

You’ll have a map, but no direction
If you ignore the warning signs.
Your heart’s a sundial and a compass
That points north, when courage shines.

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1 year 9 months ago

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1 year 9 months ago

I felt the title was a bit of a play on words. I don't know if it was a deliberate thing or just a fluke, but I like it. ~ Geezer.
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1 year 9 months ago

1 year 9 months ago

Hello, Michael,
Enjoyed all of this, especially "the heart's a sundial and a compass..."
Wise words!
L