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Oct 28, 2023
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WM
My favorite book sits in the middle of my book shelf
I finished it the other week, but something doesn't feel the same
I go back and re read my favorite chapters sometimes when i miss it
Maybe one day I'll pick up a different book and discover the beauty of it
But i don't think i am ready to let go of the beauty of this one
I still read this book, even though i know the ending will stay the same
I still read those chapters
OUR chapters
I think i am just not ready to let go of this book, to let go of YOU, of US, of what we had.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: wm was my boy he was my favorite person but our book had to come to and end
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