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Nov 28, 2023
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This poem is part of the challenge:
November 2023 Challenge Things That Make You Smile
SMILE
SMILE
Whatever the reason prompt or cause
A smile in response, can offer proof
Sometimes it can be hard to convince
Especially if it is twisted into a wince
It may look strained, if one is aloof
Suggesting a need for a token pause
A smile is both a signal and reaction
Whether minimal or full toothy grin
A gesture that feels warm and sincere
Except when cold pressed lips appear
But if also seen in the eyes, it's a win
And can also signify deep satisfaction
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Geezer
1 year 7 months ago
Smiles...
I think that most times, one can tell what kind of smile
is given and how it is received. I got the sensation of seeing
a big smile and feeling of satisfaction.
You have gotten a big smile from somewhere just recently.
Good for you! We all need them. ~Geez.
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Sen99
1 year 5 months ago
A Smile is ......
... like curve that sets things straight
I wear PPE most of the time, so any smile no one can see
A good stanza to end with, nicely done.