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Apr 19, 2011
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She Wrote Off Rape MIXED VERSION
She Wrote Off Rape
An uncle guardian,
He took his wife
And me,
For a joyous ride
He slipped into the beach.
Parked his car
And whispered in my ear
Would you like a ride on me?
My hairs stood on end,
Teenage smacked
Of stark nudity,
Virgin me,
Infidel he,
His wife asleep
In the back seat,
He wanted to eat me
She was distraught
At his menacing thought,
A guardian what?
She felt smeared of a stench of rape,
As his breath went down her nape,
Thanked God she wasn’t alone,
Else she’d been raped.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
scribbler
14 years 2 months ago
hello
the simplicity magnifies the power of this.bravo........................stan
loved
14 years 2 months ago
if only
you had read the poets true HAIKU AND ACKNOWLWDGEMENT OF THE FACT THat
it did happen last night the night after she wrote it
u'll have grt regards for the teenager
so i composed an admixture.
thanks for the read
Eduardo Cruz
14 years 2 months ago
Loved
this kind of write pisses me off, just the thought that there are preditors out there revolts me. I have three daughters. there grown now. they range from 40 - 22yrs. old. I can not imagine such a thing happening, I would hunt the bastard down. I can do it I've done it before for lesser reasons.
To real this write, I try to avoid such ugly thoughts. It's just a choice I have made, it's not buring my head in the sand.
loved
14 years 2 months ago
IN THE WORLD OF TODAY
where there are mixed multi racial and multiple marriages
any thing is possible
we must face realities of life.
this is based on a true confession
by some one i have no need to doubt
she is still a virgin 19 years aage