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Jan 03, 2024
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To be brave is to live
In the hustle and bustle of everyday strife,
There are moments that bring a touch of life,
Small but beautiful, they sparkle and gleam,
Making our existence a wondrous dream.
A gentle breeze on a warm summer's day,
Caressing our skin as we laugh and play,
The sound of raindrops tapping on the roof,
A lullaby that whispers with a soothing truth.
A smile from a stranger passing us by,
A simple gesture that makes our spirits fly,
A heartfelt conversation, shared with a friend,
Words that uplift and help us mend.
In these small moments, life finds its grace,
A reminder that joy can be found in any place.
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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neopoet
1 year 6 months ago
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Lavender
1 year 6 months ago
To Be Brave Is To Live
Hello, Anna,
It's always wonderful to read your poetry. This is full of acts of bravery, but "...a smile from a stranger passing us by" really resonates with me. Thank you for this one.
L
Tawny023
1 year 6 months ago
Really wonderful execution
All so true
Candlewitch
1 year 6 months ago
Dear Anna,
I love these lines:
In these small moments, life finds its grace,
A reminder that joy can be found in any place.
very well stated!
*hugs, Cat
MermaidMaster
1 year 5 months ago
hi anna!!
hi anna!!
what a lovely poem! Your sense of rhythm is delightful and I love the theme of this poem. Your love for living shines through and I love how you appreciate the smaller moments in life. very well done!
Anna Severchuk
7 months 2 weeks ago
I am so glad it worked out
I am so glad it worked out like I imagined and the idea is clear. Thank you!