HAUNTED HOUSE COMP

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "Haunted House Comp" effectively creates a spooky and eerie atmosphere through its vivid descriptions and use of sensory imagery. The use of words like "darkness," "mature tomb," "worn weathered battered door," and "timber splintered floors" help to establish a sense of foreboding and decay. The mention of the "roaming spirits" and the "webbed portrait frame" adds to the haunted ambiance of the poem.

One suggestion for improvement would be to consider the flow and structure of the poem. While the fragmented and disjointed structure can contribute to the overall sense of unease, it may be beneficial to experiment with different line breaks or punctuation to enhance the rhythm and pacing. This could help the reader to better engage with the poem and its haunting atmosphere.

Additionally, it would be helpful to further develop the narrative or emotional arc of the poem. Currently, the poem focuses on setting the scene and describing the haunted house, but it would be interesting to

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I love spooky situations an haunted house motifs! This piece is very descriptive in language usage. I am glad I read it!

*hugs, Cat