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Jan 16, 2024
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The End of the World
The End of the World
Written by Kelly Ann Wilson
You can try to comfort me
With how the moon prevails and pulls the tides
The wheat still turns golden brown
From the sun which still shines
And maybe it’s true the rivers run on
Between the ever-growing pines
You can say it’s not the end of the world
Oh, but it is the end of mine
Written January 13, 2024
© 2024 Kelly Ann Wilson
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Read my writer’s blog at https://kwilsonarts.wordpress.com
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Leslie
1 year 5 months ago
Kelly
I thouroghly enjoyed this poem. This is a subject
that is of great interest to me.
Candlewitch
1 year 5 months ago
Hello Kelly Ann,
I too, enjoyed your poem. my favorite lines are:
You can say it’s not the end of the world
Oh, but it is the end of mine
Some punctuation would be nice. Otherwise there is nothing I would change.
Would you please read my poem titled: Snow Globes (?) I would really value your opinion. Thank you.
*hugs, Cat