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Feb 10, 2024
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Jeez! Not Another Love Poem!
It was my silliness, I thought.
Or maybe it was just the smile.
Turns out it was our laughter.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: That's it - LOL!
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Candlewitch
1 year 5 months ago
hello,
Yes, That will do it....
*hugs, Cat
Unca Fez
1 year 5 months ago
What Attracted Us...
What attracted us (Cat and myself) to each other was our outlandish sense of humor. It is amazing how a shared laugh can bring two people together. Well done!