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Mar 20, 2024
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Fairytale Waltz
"Can we dance on the moon?", she asks.
"We might even be graceful there, low gravity and all,
but the scientists don't recommend it", I reply."
"Well, if we hold on to each other at least
we'll be together if we jump too high
and float away.", her playful remark.
"Well, scientists be damned! I can't think of anyone else
I'd like to be with out there among the stars.", I assure her.
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MermaidMaster
1 year 3 months ago
Hi Michael Anthony!
Hi Michael Anthony!
What a beautiful poem! The dialogue is so incredibly sweet and endearing. I love love love this poem, thank you for sharing!
Best,
MM