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Apr 20, 2024
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Maybe Baby
Maybe I should have told you how lovely you were
when the sun made you shade your look-away eyes.
Maybe I could have been more help with your troubled daughter
when you spoke of your regrets for her.
Maybe our concert tickets I left for you after we parted
was the right gesture for me to say goodbye.
Maybe I should have realized your crowded past
didn't leave much room for our future.
Maybe maybe just wasn't enough.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
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