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The Properties of Embers
It took me a while to understand love.
The kind that stays around and doesn't light new fires,
but shows you how to tend the embers that last.
The heat is still strong and gives a warmth you shouldn't ignore.
Embers when she still thinks you're funny after all these years.
Embers when forgiveness is given with just a look.
Embers when she says she wants to pass first,
because she doesn't want to know grief like that.
Embers are sometimes careless in this way.
Their heat can still burn you even without touch.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Rumination on a mature and comfortable love.
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Leslie
1 year 1 month ago
Michael Anthony
That is what I want, if only I didn't snuff them out. Great job!
Michael Anthony
1 year 1 month ago
Thank you for stopping by to
Thank you for stopping by to coment Leslie - much appreciated!
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Lavender
1 year 1 month ago
The Properties of Embers
Beautiful, Michael,
A sincere poem from a grateful heart and tender soul.
Thank you!
L
Michael Anthony
1 year 1 month ago
Spot on L! Thanks for
Spot on L! Thanks for commenting.
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