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Hon
Hon
This poem is part of the challenge:

05/24 Locked In Basement

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Locked in the basement

Dark and isolated stay
like living in hell
where the secret is kept
with the whispering talk
at a deadly ghost place
with silent hearing echoes
facing with the relentless fear
as the heart pounding rapidly
by a terrifying despair
an eerie cold shivering in a chill
sending down to the spine
from the haunted spirit appearance
screaming out loud carelessly
“Get out of my place” or You will be dead!”
horror racing through the mind
with tears of frightening sigh
to look for a way to escape
in praying for a rescue to come
for the crisis to be over soon

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: USA, USA

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Comments

Rula

Rula

1 year 1 month ago

Hon

Good language use. I thought the rushing rhythm and pace in most of the lines helped showing the fear of the author who trapped there.
Best wishes