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Jun 19, 2024
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Come
I feel myself rotting
Waiting,
For,
You.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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neopoet
1 year ago
Neopoet AI 5-29-23 version
The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:
This poem has a strong sense of longing and decay, creating a sense of tension and unease. The repetition of "Waiting, For, You" emphasizes the speaker's anticipation and perhaps a feeling of being stuck in a state of decay until the arrival of the subject. Consider expanding on the emotions or imagery to provide more depth and clarity to the reader. Additionally, exploring different poetic devices such as metaphor or symbolism could enhance the overall impact of the poem.
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Leslie
1 year ago
kowque
simple, painful and honest. I am grateful that you are writing again. You are an inspiration!
kowque
1 year ago
Thank you
Always
Leslie
1 year ago
Kowque
God bless!!! I know that you out up a valiant fight!
kowque
1 year ago
It's hard
Articulating everything.
So, I'm keeping things short.
But thank you for taking the time to read and comment
Geezer
1 year ago
Yeah...
Just keep writing, it helps. ~ Geezer.
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