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Rare Morning

The sun was in its benefactive climb,
as was the moonscape of my dreaming.

And though I was not conscious
of the real world of the sun,
I was of all worlds.

Through the patterned
window of the universe
the sun came to my pane
and said, "arise,
I bring a beautiful day."

I came to breakfast
and found in my house momentary solitude,
and of this did I nourish the morning.

I sat to life's sparkling stream,
silent pool,
and saw the sun color the tree
In all that life has to offer...

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When, on my verse, there alighted
an endless winging:

"Wonder is boundless, nature more so,
but a momentary solitude is greater
than all the spinning things."

About This Poem

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About the Author

Country/Region: The Nederlands

Favorite Poets: William Butler Yates, Wallace Stevens, Giuseppe ungaretti, William Blake

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kowque

kowque

1 year 10 months ago

That line...powerful

" I was of all worlds"

Feels like you became another being. A higher being.That was no longer corporeal ,but, another type of existence. I loved this piece

T

tyro

1 year 10 months ago

neopoet ai

you honor me. over 95% of my poems gets the anser: "It is not feasible to offer feedback."

kowque

kowque

1 year 10 months ago

You honour us

With your words; I feel blessed for having read it.

Have a great day.

Just be awesome(you already are,just be you)

T

tyro

1 year 10 months ago

Hi Leslie

your words mean a lot to me. I am pleased you saw something in this.

Tyro