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Rare Morning
The sun was in its benefactive climb,
as was the moonscape of my dreaming.
And though I was not conscious
of the real world of the sun,
I was of all worlds.
Through the patterned
window of the universe
the sun came to my pane
and said, "arise,
I bring a beautiful day."
I came to breakfast
and found in my house momentary solitude,
and of this did I nourish the morning.
I sat to life's sparkling stream,
silent pool,
and saw the sun color the tree
In all that life has to offer...
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When, on my verse, there alighted
an endless winging:
"Wonder is boundless, nature more so,
but a momentary solitude is greater
than all the spinning things."
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neopoet
12 months ago
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kowque
12 months ago
That line...powerful
" I was of all worlds"
Feels like you became another being. A higher being.That was no longer corporeal ,but, another type of existence. I loved this piece
Leslie
12 months ago
Tyro
Majestic and beautiful! Great work, one of my favorites!
tyro
12 months ago
neopoet ai
you honor me. over 95% of my poems gets the anser: "It is not feasible to offer feedback."
kowque
12 months ago
You honour us
With your words; I feel blessed for having read it.
Have a great day.
Just be awesome(you already are,just be you)
tyro
12 months ago
thank you kowque
for sharing how the poem moved you
Tyro
tyro
12 months ago
Hi Leslie
your words mean a lot to me. I am pleased you saw something in this.
Tyro