Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
Aug 02, 2024
⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
I woke up
Realised
The world
Was coming to an end
Now
I
Live
In
The
Moment
— kowque, Aug 02, 2024
Share this poem
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Rough draft
Critiques
neopoet
1 year 10 months ago
Neopoet AI 5-29-23 version
The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:
It is not feasible to offer feedback.
Please send feedback about Neo (our computer generated critique system) to https://www.neopoet.com/contact
Geezer
1 year 10 months ago
Hi Koki...
I think that you should have the title as the first line of the poem,
but you should put it down where the poem begins.
Using the first line of the piece is a very acceptable way to begin a poem.
I agree, we should live more in the moment; not always...
because we should plan for the future, but yes, living today, in the now, has benefits.
~ Geez.
.
Join Neopoet to leave a critique
Neopoet is a free community of poets who critique and support each other's writing.