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Mystic Sunset
Leaves fade
green to gold and orange,
deep crimson, too.
Blackberry gin on lips,
summer blinks away but
I still crave the taste of you.
Patchwork and grace,
leather and lace,
mountain peaks drenched
in neons streaks,
pink and orange,
sunset smeared
with a hint of lavender.
Silk caresses
before stars emerge.
We run wild,
we run feral,
but we will never
run away.
You keep me safe.
I’ll show you freedom.
Full moon howls,
shadows lingering
around a bonfire.
Mason jar of gin,
blackberry lemonade,
dancing in the dark
before the river’s lullaby
takes us to sleep
on a bed of flowers,
beneath a blanket of night.
Mountains reign mighty,
mountains stand tall,
but it is where we find
our rock and roll souls.
The sun sets as the moon rises.
They glimpse each other in the sky
before parting again
and off all the people,
of all the encounters
that could have happened
beneath their celestial dance,
somehow, this weary road,
this nomadic soul
found a way to you;
steady hands that calm,
the voice that soothes.
A solid ground so old,
it never questions.
Love is ancient.
Love is mystic.
It will never
abandon its altar.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
9 months ago
Hello Lilac
A Warm welcome to Neopoet community.
What a seamless blend between the nature and human emotions. Really amazing tender use of language
Many favorite lines, these are just some if I have to choose
"We run wild, we run feral, but we will never run away," and "Love is ancient. Love is mystic."
Looking forward to reading more from your quill
Thank you for sharing.
LilacsandLace
9 months ago
Thank you, Rula!
I appreciate you stopping by to read!
Candlewitch
9 months ago
Dear LilacsAndLace,
A stunningly gorgeous poem you have penned! Rula was right: It is hard to choose favorite lines/thoughts, but I have done so. Mine are:
somehow, this weary road,
this nomadic soul
found a way to you;
steady hands that calm,
the voice that soothes.
A solid ground so old,
it never questions.
Love is ancient.
Love is mystic.
It will never
abandon its altar.
*hugs and bits of star dust, Cat
LilacsandLace
9 months ago
Much appreciated.
Had to lighten the mood after the last few, you know. Lol. I appreciate your kind comments, as always.