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Oct 20, 2024
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The Sound of the Seagulls
The sound of the seagulls,
Once alien to me,
When washed ashore on this island,
Across the deep blue sea,
Every face a stranger,
And in a foreign land,
Far away from what I knew then,
Afraid of what was planned,
The winds of change still blow,
Take me like a feather,
As I float along on their breeze,
Through storms that I weather,
The tides have been and gone,
Washed away footprints in the sand,
Found peace in the unknown,
As I held my own hand,
One day i’ll find my home,
Find my place amongst the people,
Until then i’ll find comfort in,
The sound of the seagulls.
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Leslie
9 months ago
Abbey Jenkins
I thought this was great it resounded the way that i feel! We all need to find a place and people to call home. Keep up your faith, it will come too you!
Abbey Jenkins
9 months ago
Leslie
Thank you Leslie, it’s great to hear this resonated with you. Writing is a great form of expression for me, thank you for your comments!
Lavender
9 months ago
The Sound of the Seagulls
Hello, Abbey,
Welcome to Neopoet. This is a lovely poem, and feels both literal and metaphorical. Very reflective. Hope to see more of your work!
Thank you!
Lavender
Abbey Jenkins
9 months ago
Lavender
Thank you so much Lavender, i appreciate your comments!