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Oct 22, 2024
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Rip Off!
Computer techs
on the internet.
Taking your dime
way out of line!
Don't call for help
squander your wealth.
Taking your money
they just think it's funny.
I've got a solution
for their sort of pollution.
Call up a freind
on whom you depend.
Put them to the test
reroute their request.
Fix it alone
on youtube you know.
Their scheme
is outrageous.
Thir sickness
contageous.
So lock your PC
then they can't see.
Never again
trust them my freind!
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I had this experience with a computer geek. I signed for a month, but they changed all the rules. I am madder than hell, but still believe, that all will be well! I'll call up a freind who understands and them. Who can give them the word!
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
8 months 2 weeks ago
Dear Leslie,
I am sorry for your computer troubles. I am lucky, Steven usually can help me with mine. When he cannot, we have a shop a few blocks away, where the guys there are really good and helpful. we live in a very small city wher everyone knows most everyone else.
*hugs, Cat
Leslie
8 months 2 weeks ago
Rip Off!
Thank you for reading, this is becoming a very bad day already!
mark
8 months 2 weeks ago
Scammers!
They are all over the web. These days everyone is looking for a fast buck. Yes! A knowledgeable friend is a great resource. Nicely composed poem, Leslie. You might want to work on punctuation to further enhamce it.
Later,
Mark
Leslie
8 months 2 weeks ago
Rip off!
This really screwed up my laptop, but thanks for your attention. I'm working on my punctuation!