Morgan le 'Fey (Gorlois and Igraine's Daughter) an epic narritive poem

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem's narrative is engaging and well-structured, with a clear progression of events. It effectively uses the Arthurian legend as a backdrop, incorporating characters and plot elements from the mythos into the narrative.

However, the poem could benefit from a more consistent use of meter and rhyme. The current structure is somewhat irregular, which can disrupt the flow of the narrative and make the poem more difficult to read.

The poem also tends to tell rather than show. For example, instead of stating outright that "Morgan was shocked with horror and disbelief," the poem could describe her reaction in a way that allows the reader to infer her emotions. This would make the narrative more engaging and immersive.

The poem's language is generally clear and effective, but there are a few instances where the phrasing is awkward or unclear. For example, the line "a helmet of gold to hide all but his eyes, whos piercing prominence would engage and snag..." is somewhat difficult to parse.

The poem could also benefit from a more varied use of poetic devices. While it does employ some metaphor and symbolism, it primarily relies on straightforward narrative. Incorporating more figurative language, imagery, and other poetic devices could enhance the poem's emotional impact and aesthetic appeal.

Lastly, the poem's punctuation is somewhat inconsistent, with some lines ending in periods and others not. Consistent punctuation would improve the poem's readability.

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This is a bit long.
I'll come back to it sometime today. I much adore Arthur's legend.
Soon!

An epic it is!!
I really don't feel qualified to give any suggestions for improvement other than I wished to get it rhymed or at least giving more attention to internal rhymes and alliteration.That would make it easier for any reader to be engaged in the narrative details and make it more memorable.
However, this being said, I just assure it's a mere point of view.
I urge those who find in themselves the qualifications to read and give a better constructive feedback as this is absolutely a potential piece of art.
Sorry if I couldn't help..
Thank you for sharing.dear.

I understood this , it read like a intricate story. I'm always interested in what you have to say. I like Rula have relieved myself from commenting too much, because I think there are still things that you can do to accomplish your end result. I know you're still working on it and I will be back to read more soon.

Job well done! I look forward to seeing further development but I am really enjoying these story poems of yours.

I think your offering is honorable for all the work you've done. I wish that you would write something short and beuatiful. Some thing I can more easily understand. I don't intend to offend, but I love th the older poems a little better. Please forgive me.